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Okumaya devam et...
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| #:a ''(prose, spelling, and grammar)'': {{GAList/check|}} | #:a ''(prose, spelling, and grammar)'': {{GAList/check|}} |
| :I would suggest removing the two red links in the article prose. | :I would suggest removing the two red links in the article prose. |
| :* Removing them would be against guidelines per [[WP:REDYES]] and [[MOS:REDLINKS]], which recommend removing them only in cases of clear non-notability or significant overlinking. - G | |
| :Furthermore, you could merge the two paragraphs of the "Personal life and death" section since the latter is only a sentence long. | :Furthermore, you could merge the two paragraphs of the "Personal life and death" section since the latter is only a sentence long. |
| :* Done, good point. - G | |
| <br/> b ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|MoS]] for [[WP:LEAD|lead]], [[WP:LAYOUT|layout]], [[WP:WTW|word choice]], [[WP:WAF|fiction]], and [[Wikipedia:Embedded list|lists]])'': {{GAList/check|}} | <br/> b ''([[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|MoS]] for [[WP:LEAD|lead]], [[WP:LAYOUT|layout]], [[WP:WTW|word choice]], [[WP:WAF|fiction]], and [[Wikipedia:Embedded list|lists]])'': {{GAList/check|}} |
| #It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''. | #It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''. |
Okumaya devam et...